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Sad Love Story

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“Trust me,” he said,
And held out his hand.
“I will” she replied,
Like trusting the sand.

“Love me,” he cooed,
And showed off his heart.
“I love you,” she said,
Now can’t be apart.

“Follow me,” he insisted,
And started to show.
“Take me away,” She agreed,
And let her life go.

“Leave me,” he ordered,
And pushed her away.
“ I hate you!” she cried,
Still lost to this day.

“Kill me,” she whispered,
As she looked down the cup.
“Need to go,” she sobbed,
Her life, to the poison, gave up.
Tee hee. Sorry if this bugs you guys. The rhyme scheme and general style annoys me. However, i liked the idea.
Um, its a poem... about a girl... fooled by just another guy. Not really tricked, but led into somthing that would never last.
It's overly dramatic becuase girls tend to get that way when it comes to affairs of the heart. ^^; Never /me/ of course. :D
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